I have a good friend named Jake
Who always makes my head ache
He always wants to play
I want him to go away
About Me
- Zach G.
- Kangaroos, Skippy, Austria
- I like carrots and cars and couches and like dogs and horses and especially Woolly Mammoths and dragons because they are awesome and they are cloning one so I can own one for myself one day. I also like Kangaroos.
2 comments:
good job its funny and o so true
make sure the rythm stays on though convince the reader the last line fits because it does but make them read it the way you want them to
change the last line to
i push him away
i make him go away
i force him away
flows better
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