i dont know if hens can fly so that doesnt make sense if you want to keep it then you could change the last line to why did he open the pen cause i think it would lleave the reder thinkin
I like carrots and cars and couches and like dogs and horses and especially Woolly Mammoths and dragons because they are awesome and they are cloning one so I can own one for myself one day. I also like Kangaroos.
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funny poem
make it clearer that the pen is where the chickens are
god knows how ull do it it
but your zach you will find a WAY
I think that you shoudl take the hen out of the poem because no one would want to read this poeam
find something better
rhyming dictionary
i dont know if hens can fly so that doesnt make sense if you want to keep it then you could change the last line to why did he open the pen cause i think it would lleave the reder thinkin
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