Friday, April 11, 2008

My Friend Ben

I have a good friend named Ben
Who was best friends with a hen
He opened the door
It came with a soar
He should not have opened the pen

3 comments:

jamie pennock said...

funny poem
make it clearer that the pen is where the chickens are
god knows how ull do it it
but your zach you will find a WAY

ALEX MAHONEY said...

I think that you shoudl take the hen out of the poem because no one would want to read this poeam
find something better
rhyming dictionary

lukestein said...

i dont know if hens can fly so that doesnt make sense if you want to keep it then you could change the last line to why did he open the pen cause i think it would lleave the reder thinkin